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BYT's avatar

the only life i'd ever want to live <3

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crim's avatar

same girl

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Stephen Johnson III's avatar

Maybe my favorite yet. Good work, my friend

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crim's avatar

thank youuuuu :)

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i wrote this instead of crying's avatar

Most beautiful work ive seen thus far on here, resonated heavily, keep it up!!💜

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crim's avatar

thank you for encouraging me 🥺🥺 i'm glad you liked it 🫶

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A. G. Giberson | Poet's avatar

Beautifully written!

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crim's avatar

thank you so much :) i'm glad you liked it ❤️❤️ i was a bit nervous about posting it

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Marpy Hayse's avatar

Such a kaleidoscope of life back when we took the time to enjoy it, when we actually touched grass.

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crim's avatar

the good ole days am i right

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OutaWandering's avatar

I adore all your poems - the rhythm, the word choice, the imagery - and most of all the emotion. This one’s my favourite, but I can still feel the love you invoked in my chest - woven into your words - from the other ones I read before this

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crim's avatar

awee thank you so much outa 🥺

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Purpledot's avatar

Your words are intense and nostalgic! Keep writing for you paint pictures with your words 🫢💜

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crim's avatar

thank you so much!

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Rachel 🐑's avatar

“love the Lord with all your heart.”

we didn’t know what that kind of love looked like.

Absolutely beautiful, great writing. I am looking forward to reading more of your work

xx

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Caleb's avatar

It reads like four season of growth grief and living in middle America

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